Thursday, 31 October 2013

The story about follow

Follow was lonely in the dark, he has no family so he was afraid of the dark box.

He started to look for food to eat. He went out of the box and he tried to look for food in the rubbish bin and he found a donut and he was excited to eat the donut.
Fellow went on an adventure to New Zealand to every class to make new friends. He went to Henderson North School to find friend to tweet with him and he went to rm1 first because we tweet to a lot of friends and meet heaps of friends to play with.

By Sovan




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12 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 October 2013 at 13:06

    Hello Sovan and North Henderson,
    This is an interesting piece of writting!
    One thing I liked about it was that you added a picture.
    It helps to create an image in your mind.

    I can't wait to see more posts soon!
    From Chloe, MACC :D

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  2. Anonymous31 October 2013 at 13:12

    Hi Sovan,
    My name is Rico and I'm from MACC. I think that was a very good story and that it was very creative. How did it get to New Zealand??

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  3. Anonymous31 October 2013 at 13:12

    Hello,
    my name is Julien. Follow is a very cute bird/fish thing. I hope he's not lonely anymore. How did he overcome his fears?
    From Julien

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  4. Anonymous31 October 2013 at 13:12

    Hello,
    my name is Ian, that follow of yours is very cute, what is he exactly supposed to be?

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    1. Reid NZ31 October 2013 at 17:36

      Our class takes part in a chat session each week with other NZ schools using twitter, its called Kidsedchatnz, Follow is the mascot and is meant to be like the twitter logo. This term he got sent to room 1.

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  5. Anonymous31 October 2013 at 13:17

    Hey Sovan
    nice story i thougt it was really good!
    I loved the story it had lots of creativity in it and i liked how you included your own school in the story!
    ican't wait to hear more about fellow. if you would like to check out some thing about me just go to my blog the address is www.6smaccbrooke.blogspot.com
    i hope you like it!
    cya
    Brooke

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  6. Anonymous31 October 2013 at 13:22

    wow what a great story sovan and it was really touchi8ng too. I really liked it how you said "he wanted some new friends to tweet with. It really linked to the app twitter and how its all about social network. I personally think you did an awesome job this is the best story I have seen so far. Can you tell me a bit more of the backround story of the fellow, did he get bullied or something.
    CHICKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  7. joseph St George UK8 November 2013 at 00:49

    I like how you did your swimming thing.

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  8. Amelie st georges uk8 November 2013 at 00:50

    I really like this blog. The sience exsperemant looks fun.

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  9. Nate St george UK8 November 2013 at 00:58

    Hello Ian !!!!! are you having a nice time?

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  10. hana st george uk8 November 2013 at 01:04

    I like the the fish. What kind of fish is it?

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