Tuesday, 15 April 2014

Autumn Poem

This poem was written without any assistance from the teacher after the children were asked to include some alliteration, this is by Evian.


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  1. Anonymous17 April 2014 at 13:33

    Leah said...
    Wow! this is a great poem I diden't Know it was Autumn there!This reminds me of fall back in Wisconsin.did you know that in winter if you dig up the old leaves from fall they can turn a little purple!What time of the year do you have fell and winter?
    Leah Malaiysia

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  2. Anonymous17 April 2014 at 13:43

    Hi i'm Tommy and I really liked that poem you made. You inspired me a lot from that poem too.Can you please make another poem next time?

    Tommy
    MKIS

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  3. Anonymous7 May 2014 at 21:59

    Great poem I really enjoyed reading your poem, I read it over and over again.

    Reggie and Charlie S

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  4. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 12:51

    Great poetry! I also write poetry. Poetry can also have the same sounds of the last word in a sentence. Have you wrote any other poetry?

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  5. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 12:53

    Hi its Amalie and your poem is so good i just wanna read this poem everyday and also please make more poems.

    Amalie Malaysia school Mkis

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  6. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 12:58

    I love your poem! It is a very creative poem. It makes me feel like I am inside the poem.

    Mia
    MKIS

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  7. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 13:05

    great i love it its very nice and i like to read it over and over again.

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  8. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 13:13

    Great poem.I also write poetry. But I mainly write alliteration. Here is one of my pieces: Mary made many muffins in the morning. Sally saw seven slippery snakes slithering slowly in the Sahara sands.
    Leyla MKIS Malaysia

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  9. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 13:19

    Great poem! Even I wouldn't think of a poem so nice. This poem reminds me of the poem writing we did in class. It also reminds me of autumn and late autumn back home in Bangladesh. Did you go on a leaf art contest or a leaf boat race?

    Radia, M'KIS, KL, Malaysia

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