Friday 15 March 2013

My Kiwiana Writing




WHAT MAKES A KIWI KID?

Kiwi  kids are all about eating Hokey-pokey ice-cream till they explode!

Kiwi kids are all about being fearless when the time is right.

Being a kiwi kid means that you are adventurous and brave when the time comes.

Kiwi kids are about doing the right thing.

Kiwi kids are all about partying all night long and when it is 8am in the morning, you are snoring so loud, your mom hears you!

Being a kiwi kid is being prepared to learn something new.

A kiwi kid is learning to save the enviroment.

Being a kiwi kid is about sunbathing all day long until you are  totally tanned  to the brim!

Being a kiwi kid is learning to survive.

A kiwi kid is all about representing New Zealand.

Being a kiwi kid is really as exciting as you might think it is!

By Renitta

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Renitta
    This is a great poem! I agree it is really exciting to be a kiwi kid. I love how you said that kiwi kids are fearless when it is right - it's good to be a bit scared about some things!

    What is your favourite thing about being a kiwi kid?

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    1. Hi Miss Lyall,

      My favourite thing to do as a kiwi kid is to party all night . It is so fun, except that it is a school night and I don't wake up the next morning!
      My other favourite thing to do as a kiwi kid is to be brave when it is the right time. I really think that when the time is right, I would know my way around things!

      Thankyou for the lovely comment Miss Lyall! :)
      Renitta

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  2. Great work Renitta! I agree with you on everything except ''partying all night''. Good work any way.

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  3. Hi Renitta,

    That was great work. I enjoyed it a lot. My favourite part was the first line ' A kiwi kid is all about eating hokey pokey Icecream till you explode!' Great job. I think you are a great poet.

    What is your favourite flavour of icecream?

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